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:p
 

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You need to fire the camera man and the director.....
 

whoosh

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Yes your right it was a rush job. I tore a strip of the guy and made sure he was aware of your displeasure :thumbs_up:
 

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This track pairs an easygoing acoustic blues-folk rhythm with a playful, conversational spoken-sung narrative referencing the famous viral Fenton dog meme. Built around a steady, swinging acoustic guitar groove at a relaxed mid-tempo with melodic whistling joining in around 00:13, the arrangement stays light and unpretentious. The vocal delivery is off-the-cuff and humorous, delivered in a warm baritone that directly addresses the animals featured on screen. Visually, the clip cycles through footage of a grazing spotted deer at 00:10, jackdaws perched on a hollowed tree trunk around 00:20, detailed close-ups of tree bark, and an Egyptian goose foraging in the grass at 00:42, punctuated by text overlays and whispered commentary. The casual storytelling vibe gives the piece a charmingly quaint character, and the acoustic guitar picking provides a solid, toe-tapping rhythm throughout. However, the production feels a bit fragmented. The transition back to car interior shots near 00:55 interrupts the visual and musical flow rather abruptly, and the audio recording on the spoken vocal line "anybody here seen Fenton?" sounds slightly muffled against the guitar track. Structurally, repeating the same basic blues vamp without a distinct bridge or dynamic lift makes the track feel more like an extended comedic sketch than a fully realized song. Sharpening the mix on the vocals and building a clearer melodic payoff would elevate this from a cute homage into a much punchier track.